How did You?

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How did you final edit

A little tug to the heart
Cause of the melting smile on his face
All my walls came down easily
Pains a little ,stings a bit
but all of it feels worth of him being around
Telling me he wont let go easy
accepting what I feel
It looks so messy just like a dream
But those kind of dreams don’t come true
Then how did you?

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Being 1sane 😉

31 responses to “How did You?”

  1. Feelings so well expressed! Anand Bose from Kerala

    1. Thank you so much! I am smiling. Have a great day?

    2. Thank you so much! I am smiling. Have a great day!

  2. lovely work 🙂

    1. Thank you!

      1. welcome dear

  3. awwwww so sweet! I love it 🙂 Great work!

    1. Thank you so much 🙂

    1. Hey! Thanks Pal! I ll put do it with other awards too! Hope you don’t mind !

  4. Hi there, I got here through fixcoffiction blog. I think that first of all you do write very good and second I think is great the prompts you give and that you bring bloggers together to share each others writing. Glad I stumbled to your blog.

    1. Hey! Thank you so much! I am so glad you liked my work. Yes and I do want that….all the bloggers to come together. So would you be participating? It d be fun to have you here!
      Thank you so much charly to stop by! Hope to see you around!

      1. I´ll be delighted to participate, now things are a bit hectic but when they settle down I´ll come more around and participate how I can.

      2. That is great! I am sure you’ll enjoy Hope things get alot more free for you! Thank you so much dude! 🙂

  5. 🙂 a nice poem! You are talented Girl Mashallah, Nice to find you here in this blogging world!

    1. Thank you! I am so happy you liked it!! I am glad to find you here too!

  6. Bahahahha can’t believe that I had already read it when I first followed your blog and stalked you. Talk about short term memory. Read it again and as usual killin it!!!

  7. I love this feeling of having something or someone come true after being told all your life that things like this just don’t happen in real life.

    1. Omg yes! That was exactly what I felt like! I am so happy you could get that through the poem! I feel like its purpose is solved haha Thanks for the comment!!

      1. Hahah 😀 i know that feeling too 😉

      2. Hahaha you ve got a great blog too!

      3. Thank you 🙂

  8. Great read

    1. Thank you! 🙂

    1. Thank you! 🙂

      1. You are very welcome 🙂

  9. Ananya Aishwarya Avatar
    Ananya Aishwarya

    nice piece…great writing !!!

    check out my blogs too, n follow plz..

    1. Thanks! And I will 🙂

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