A little hope, A little life

Holaa! Merry Christmas guys! This was my first poem i published publishing out to the world. It just goes with the TTT and I like it soo…Hope you like it!!

A little hope in a little life
A little tug and a huge smile
A little love travels a long road
Its Our story
Its Our fights
Long nights seem so little in time
Beautiful kisses and unshameful snides
So many hurdles so many pins
But our bubble stay s the same
Covers us over our heads
Pushing us together again and again
To save the bubble we fight
For the little escape we get from life
For the smiles laughs and happiness we get
Just by getting you there
A little love goes a long road
A little tug gets a huge smile
Love gets a little hope in our little lives 🙂

Being 1sane 😉

36 responses to “A little hope, A little life”

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  2. I absolutely enjoyed reading this. I loved the message! 🙂

    1. Thank you so much! I am so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for stopping by ! : )

    2. Thank you so much! I am so glad you enjoyed yourself! 🙂

  3. beautiful post jade! Have a blessed 2016!

    1. Thank you! You have a great year too!

  4. This is really good. It’s like a spoken word. 💕

    1. Thank you so much! So glad you liked it !

      1. Of course!

  5. A really nice poem. Thanks for sharing

    1. You’re welcome. Thanks for the comment!

  6. This is a beautifully written poem! Love certainly gives us the hope and encouragement to live our lives. I enjoyed how you expressed that. Happy Holidays and New Year!

    1. So glad you thought that. It certainly does have some power now right? So we all are so addicted to it xD Thank you! And same to you . Hope you enjoy 😀

  7. I could not refrain from commenting. Well written!

    1. Glad you like it!

  8. Nice poem!

    1. Thank you!

    1. Thank you again pal! 🙂

      1. You’re welcome 🙂

      2. I was looking through my follower list after seeing your post in my reader and you were gone. I did not know if you knew that. I thought I was going a little too fast but went through them again and you aren’t there.

      3. I am not? But i was there right? Just went and followed back must have gotten pressed or must be a glich idk i was wondering where are pal’s reblogs? Lol I did not know that thats weird .

      4. I have accidentally done it myself but looked a little later and saw what I did.

      5. Thanks for telling me dude! Its so dumb of me to do it 🙈 So hows it going for you now!

      6. I have been ill and getting a little better. Than yesterday I was really off. I do not feel much better today. Unfortunately I have a long ride later that I have to go to. I am not looking forward to it.

      7. Thanks for telling me!

      8. You’re welcome 🙂

    1. Thank you! 🙂

  9. (Everybody has a different writing style and I like yours 🙂 )^
    Pressed enter by mistake 😛

    1. Hahaha its works with me xD Thank you Soo much!

  10. I love it 😀
    It’s amazing.
    You have a good way of writing…(Everybody has a different writing styl

    1. Thank you 😀 and yes I know everyone has different way of writting…I enjoyed ur writting too! 🙂

  11. I love it especially the last 3 lines

    1. It is a changed repeat of the first three lines. I am so glad you liked them! Thanks!!

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I’m a writer of quiet revolutions — the kind that happen inside us when no one’s looking. Through fiction, letters, and reflective essays, I explore the messy, beautiful, in-between spaces of personal growth. This blog is where I put language to becoming — not the polished version, but the real, raw, slow kind.

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