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If There is a God

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Source: If There is a God

There is God with kindness in his every inch,

That is why those grusome nights turn into mornings,

There is god with mercy in his every act

Because it is him who teaches the loveless cold hearts to love again

There is God with grace and beauty in his every move

Who makes the seeds grow strong and dig roots,

So you can rest, grow and learn under the tree

There is God because we need the little goodness left in this world.

I don’t mean to offend the real poet of the poem, I just have a strong minded belief and felt like I could write an opposite version of the poem. Thank you! 🙂

31 responses to “If There is a God”

  1. 21stCenturyCatholic Avatar
    21stCenturyCatholic

    Beautiful poem.

    Thank you for writing it.

    Such uplifting words are what this world needs more of.

    Reply
  2. kaisernicholas Avatar
    kaisernicholas

    Reblogged this on kaisernicholas and commented:
    I really like this. It speaks to me a little since I am a Christian.

    Reply
  3. happyalexx Avatar
    happyalexx

    Beautiful poem, I really love how your values shine through in everything you write. It makes your stuff stand out 🙂

    Reply
    1. jade0207 Avatar
      jade0207

      Wow. Thank you soo much!! You just made my day…or well night xD

      Reply
      1. happyalexx Avatar
        happyalexx

        Aw I’m glad!

  4. ajaykohli Avatar
    ajaykohli

    You can call it god ,I call it nature ,as its confusing as if god is there then why sufferings ,then comes karma and all births so keep faith as faith is important

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    1. jade0207 Avatar
      jade0207

      I believe we need sufferings to grow and to learn. And God is the one controlling nature , he is the one who made it. So if we don’t suffer how will we appreciate the amazing things in life?

      Reply
  5. ZIGMA Avatar
    ZIGMA

    Lovely piece, you are very much right

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    1. jade0207 Avatar
      jade0207

      Thank you so much! 🙂

      Reply
  6. Teens Stock...!!! Avatar
    Teens Stock…!!!

    Nice. It seems that your hands are practiced.

    Reply
    1. jade0207 Avatar
      jade0207

      Thank you! I guess they are at this point they can just write pretty easily!

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      1. Teens Stock...!!! Avatar
        Teens Stock…!!!

        🙂

  7. health care Avatar
    health care

    As the admin of this website is working, no hesitation very
    soon it will be well-known, due to its feature contents. Great work 🙂

    Reply
  8. Aaliyah Zahra Avatar
    Aaliyah Zahra

    Beautiful 👏🏼👏🏼

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    1. jade0207 Avatar
      jade0207

      Thank you!! How’s it going for you! Still craving chocolate? xZ

      Reply
      1. Aaliyah Zahra Avatar
        Aaliyah Zahra

        Hahaha yeah.It never stops 😛

      2. jade0207 Avatar
        jade0207

        I know where your coming from xP

  9. freckledmermaids Avatar
    freckledmermaids

    This a very sweet poem! 🙂

    Reply
    1. jade0207 Avatar
      jade0207

      Just like you? xD Thank you!

      Reply
  10. wwwpalfitness Avatar
    wwwpalfitness

    Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness and commented:
    A good new blogger, welcome her with open arms..

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    1. jade0207 Avatar
      jade0207

      Omg! Thank you so much!!

      Reply
      1. wwwpalfitness Avatar
        wwwpalfitness

        You are welcome.

    2. jade0207 Avatar
      jade0207

      Omg pal! This is the first comment and reblog of yours on my site xD

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      1. wwwpalfitness Avatar
        wwwpalfitness

        Really, are you sure? I had to have reblogged you before. I do so many followers I may not have commented, except to nominate you for an award or challenge, but I am trying to add that but I go through my followers pretty much daily;)

      2. jade0207 Avatar
        jade0207

        This is probably the first post you saw of mine xD its realllyyy old! Of course you have re blogged me before haha check which post I am talking about!

      3. wwwpalfitness Avatar
        wwwpalfitness

        I looked and the latest I saw was in December, nominated for a couple of awards, the post you wanted me to write from a woman’s POV was Dec 27th and I got to 2/3rds of your material. I may have missed if I reblogged in January…

      4. jade0207 Avatar
        jade0207

        I think I started blogging in Nov. What happened to the Wwe idea? Did you do it with the other writer?

      5. wwwpalfitness Avatar
        wwwpalfitness

        No I did not.

      6. wwwpalfitness Avatar
        wwwpalfitness

        the first post I saw of yours was the distance killed us. if I remember right…

      7. jade0207 Avatar
        jade0207

        Yeah that was the first post that got attention xD

      8. wwwpalfitness Avatar
        wwwpalfitness

        I remembered it and know you reposted it.

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