It is said that broken hearts write the darkest thoughts
Maybe because the heart that is supposed to shine
Needs some time
To light up again
So in the dark we stay
Driven by pain
Guided by art
But the hour wont last long
Just long enough for us to learn
How to fix ourselves again.
11 responses to “Fixing Ourselves”
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It is said that broken hearts write the darkest thoughts
Some what true and somewhat not.You don’t have to feel everything to write it,you don’t have to write everything to feel it.Observation and the way your thoughts rush in also counts also the state in which you are.
Maybe because the heart that is supposed to shine
Needs some time to light up againI wish it were that easy.Perhaps its not? Its not only the shine the heart needs,but also the desire to shine and to portray a more independent self.
So in dark we stay
With words as our guidesThe world light the dark,for our miseries they are that spark!
And pain as our drive
The only thing which we survive
But not for long
At times
Just till we’ll fix ourselves again.
To pull on to hope and think more human
NOTE: These are all my opinions and thought which are not necessarily correct or should be given alot of attention. 😛
Just felt I wanted to comment. XD
Nice poem.It is simple but powerful!
You can delete this comment if you think it is TOO weird. 😀-
Indeed sometimes it’s just imagination. But even to emphasis you need to feel the pain. And the rawness of it all is when you cannot take it anymore. You know when a writer uses writing to help themselves up? Here light and shine means happiness and the kinda brightness of youth and joy and everything nice. “The world light the dark” I don’t think so. The world avoides the dark. To think more human…I like that
Haha its okay I get it. I ve done this too! But thank you so much for it! And nah its just being insane xD
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Haha 😛 Ohkay 😀
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You feeling ok Jadey?
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Yup Aliyah! Haha wrote this a while ago. Thanks dude xD
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